Chris/0:All my writing is flaming diarrhea. WANNA READ IT
me:my eyes are still burning from the last time
Chris/0:Yes, it needed another pass. it's gotten one.
Chris/0:There's still a part that I feel may be lazy, but I think it's because I see it from the inside.
Chris/0:Er, wait, or were you continuing the metaphor?
me:yes, weren't you?
Christopher:Poop is funny.
Chris/0:"I raised the madeleine to my mouth, and the memory of every poop I took over my entire life came flooding back to me."